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Little Legs Run Fast by ~Effamay:iconEffamay:



Chances, probabilities, likelihoods and maybes
paint my walls with their indecisiveness,
while estimations float in my cereal.

There's just melancholy in this monotony,
when coping is no longer challenging;

I’m ready to escape the chrysalis
to live where banana skins open to reveal facts,
and you can trust the sky

to bring you a storm to destroy your home,
so you can start again
in the freshness of summer rain.
©2008-2009 ~Effamay
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and breathe.

There's a couple of lines in there that I've had in my head for a while... good to get them out.
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I love the last stanza - the feel of having to tear down one's life to reclaim the freshness of living...beautiful.
It's an understatement to say I can relate to this - I feel as if I've LIVED it.
Faved, for sure :)

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You got your toecaps reinforced with steel
Hard-wearing sole and heel
Make those tired feet feel like new
Take your pick, black or brown
Great for the country or the man in town
You're gonna need a quality shoe

"Quality Shoe" - Mark Knopfler
this is brilliant:)
especially: "you can trust the sky"
yeah. I know this too.

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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
Totally made by the last four lines
I like them, and I especially love "You can trust the sky, To bring a storm to destroy your home". I love the way it fits.

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"She looked into your eyes,
And saw what lay beneath,
Don't try to save yourself,
The circle is complete"

Hold your Colour - Pendulum
Mmmmm. That's some tasty cereal.

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If you enjoy my uncanny scrawling then visit my blog, if you dare. [link]
volcanic ash is some of the richest in the world.

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002110 Goto 013500
013500 Peek 16388, 236
013510 Poke 16389, 346
:) Wow, very powerful.

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"Somehow, everything's gonna fall right into place. (If we only had a way to make it all fall faster everyday."
-Paramore

Jessa Rose :blackrose: :rose:
Beautiful. *has nothing more to say*

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You've thrown the worst fear
That can ever be hurled
Fear to bring children
Into the world

- Bob Dylan, "Masters of War"
:cling:

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